Peer Review 1

Hi Victoria!
First of all, I love the layout of your blog, it really adds something to the words you are writing. I really enjoyed your analysis of the various purposes for which people create art and the fact that sometimes it can be used to manipulate or make a person think a particular way. When it comes to the purpose that Hopkins addresses in “God’s Grandeur”, I do not think it is just another purpose to add to the list. I think that it is quite possibly fundamental to art itself as if a piece can not make one stop and think, is it really effective in achieving any one of its purposes? Let me know what you think about this!

Keep up the great work 🙂

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2 thoughts on “Peer Review 1

  1. michaelgriffith1 says:

    Hi Tamara, the tone of this peer review is good and you make some useful comments about the layout of Victoria’s blog.

    *Please attend to editing your work carefully. Here is what I have picked up:
    * I do not think it is just another purpose to add to the list.= ? It is not really clear what you are explaining here. Try to express yourself with more clarity. This needs an example to show what you really are driving at.

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